It is true that, in this contemporary era, many people have to face loneliness and some health related issues but in the past all people used to do more exercise for keeping them fit. However, there are numerous examples behind this like lack of time or technology.
To start with, firstly, more work is being done by many individuals because they are workholic and want to earn more money in their life and office time are increased day by day according to workload. That is why they are unable to spend more time with their families. Secondly, people spend their most of the time with their smartphones or watching television rather than going in any park for exercise. For example, in the past people used to go to market for shopping or puchase something with their friends but nowadays people like to do online shopping as compared to go anywhere. Therefore, anxiety, obesity, loneliness, health related issues are common in new generation.
Another reason could be, lack of space because in the past people go in park and play lots of games and do exercise with their children but nowadays all space are taken by government for making highway, hospitals, roads e.t.c.
Looking for the solutions, first of all government must enforce new policies regarding to the games period because when games period will increase so many students will take part in physical activities and it would benificial for students. Secondly, government should set particular working hours because parents would give more time on their children and it is better for building robust relationships with parents. Parents should take care of their children and allow them for playing outside games rather than inside games.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly working hours, lack of space for doing exercises e.t.c, there are many reasons yet. We must understand that if, government would do nothing so people will have to face lots of problems like anxiety, obesity, health relay issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, first of all, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04892966361 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48666166547 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.255315361 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.583333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204340861669 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869376397267 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606361953755 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123563514331 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643693907047 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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