Families who send their children to privet schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today’s world of education systems, many believe that those students sent to private schools should not be obliged to contribute to public schools by tax payments. However, I entirely disagree with this idea and the following essay will provide justification for this case.
Not paying taxes by the families who sign up their schoolchildren for private classes, leads to a range of issues. To start with, it is everyone’s responsibility to help to have a more robust educational system in the country. More specifically, the more highly qualified students there are in the society, the less dependent we are on other nations. It clearly means that state schools must be well-funded to achieve such goals. Moreover, if these children are enrolling in expensive private schools, it already indicates that their parents are at a suitable financial level. That said, this would not happen to deprived members of the city, and their only alternative for their beloved young children is public schools. As a result, these state institutions must have the primary required facilities and competent teachers to train students for a better future.
Granted, those parents who support their children to study in public schools are of the opinion that there is no logical explanation for this; due to the fact that they are not using their services. Nevertheless, their logic is not accepted by the majority of the public.
In conclusion, although there might be some groups who find this opinion one-sided, the importance of public education should not be ignored. Consequently, I would assert that each family ought to pay for educational taxes without tax reduction concession.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82731551785 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7836732348 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326612903995 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102699161251 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487706446301 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190462595327 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033891488785 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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