The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and
cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree ?
Technology has changed the way we shop. Some people believe that with more people preferring to shop online, it will lead to the closure of shops in urban areas. I do not agree with the statement because people visiting shops in towns and cities will reduce but not in a substantial amount.
Firstly, one primary reason for shops in rural areas to continue in the future is people's preference to go for physical shopping in their leisure time. Human beings these days opt to physically shop from a variety of shops and different shopping malls to relieve stress and feel happy. For example, according to a result of a recent poll, 47% of the people between the age 27-34, went shopping at malls to feel wanted and out of work. As a result, people will now and then visit shops, which will keep them busy alive in the coming years.
Secondly, another reason shops will continue to exist is people's preference to buy from local buyers. There are still many people who do not trust the viability of online shopping and prefer to buy products from local shopkeepers, due to its benefits to touch and feel the product. For instance, Indian women still believe that local shopkeepers will give them a better and durable product compared to online companies. They have a feeling that it is a safe form of exchange as they know each other and can be reached easily. Therefore, the preference of local people will help the local shops to exist in cities and towns.
However, with the ease and convenience that technology provides, online shopping is growing. Young people prefer to shop by sitting at home or while traveling, but this can be solved by attracting juveniles by providing with a live demo
and attractive discounts.
In conclusion, people different need to shop from stores and benefit of touch and feel are a couple of reasons which will help the local shops to exist and grow in towns and cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75149700599 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3988464156 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52994011976 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8532223829 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315298987426 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125391621294 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716652434515 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162716533542 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957574818126 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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