Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">it is unquestionable for some people to make more income in their life, others said </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">that is not the case, time ought to the center of folk's universe. I am going to discuss both sides of this topic and share my opinion.
Generally, more money and less time </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">show</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> life is changing fast in contemporary society so that people have fulfilled workload without leisure activities, especially in urban area. First and foremost, deadline tasks and targets </span>are forced<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> people overtime work day and day in terms of meeting their week or month achievement. without ample rest and family time, happiness </span>will be superseded<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">. Another significant argument in favor is that people tend to </span>possess<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> health problems by making more income without enough rest. For example, it is commonly watching some related news on TV, which is a man consistent work over 24 hours and go to hospital finally. it will be a disaster for a family because people died sometimes.
More time lead life flexible and enjoyable so people could concentrate on life itself. making money is apart of life not most of them, understanding the fundamental of money in life is the key point. In the past century, public thought 8 hours work, 8 hours entertainment and 8 hours sleep is perfect for human, with huge improved technology changed life pace on the earth, lessen public working time is essential and capable. Nowadays, people work for themselves not only for money.
In conclusion, life </span>should be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> happy so have more time is preferable.</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11481481481 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.74629448996 2.80592935109 169% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3579184342 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120176908609 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569739099845 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429418622018 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943976365478 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194776579996 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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