Higher salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a raging debate nowadays where some people say that higher salaries are important while others say that job satisfaction is more important. I find this topic contentious, however, in my opinion, I believe that job satisfaction is most important. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate and put forward examples to support my argument.
It can be seen that people who are paid higher wages in the industry are often given more responsibilities and thus the end result is dissatisfaction with the job as they tend to spend most of the time working. To elucidate this work alcoholism has a direct impact on their health as well as their personal life. In India, a recent survey published by Economic Times highlighted that people who were paid higher salaries were expected to handle more work which results in high attrition rates in a company and also in many cases was a major reason for the poor health of an employee.
On the contrary, it is commonly seen that people who are satisfied with their work often tend to do more and perform better. The job satisfaction provides many benefits like healthy work-life balance and success at both professional and personal front. Similarly, it is evident from a recent research paper published in a magazine that people who were satisfied with their work often produced better results for the company.
To conclude it can be seen that there is a proliferation of facts which help me to conclude that job satisfaction is more important in a longer perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, thus, well, while, as well as, in many cases, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90310077519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82135667408 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7568952839 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172940307779 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689546634039 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637785725021 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110452769305 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346062969476 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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