Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas
Health, education and trade are vital for the progress of a developing nation. It is proposed that authorities of a developing nations should more actively participate in helping developing nations in these domains. I entirely agree with this view, as developed nations should help poorer nations on humanitarian domains, and in addition to it such coalitions are bound to give collateral benefits and are must for more comprehensive growth of globe. This essay shall discuss the advantage of more participation of richer nations in growth of poorer nations.
It is a moral duty of a richer nation to help poorer with resources available plenty to former. Such philanthropic acts are must for overall growth of whole continent in long run. This can be explained with a concrete example of united states of America helping eradication of communicable diseases in Africa by providing free health care to the inhabitants of that continent. This way firstly united states of America is helping people of Africa to get disease free and secondly trying to curb the spread of disease which if not eradicated will eventually spread to other continents including theirs’s.
Moreover, collateral benefits can be expected from coalitions of richer and poorer nations. For instance, if a developing country is providing free education or exporting certain goods to developing nation, later country can in turn provide duty free transportation access to the former. Hence such philanthropic acts are essential for more harmonious environment.
To sum up with, Richer nations should help poorer nations in the domains which they are lacking in to fulfill their moral duties and in addition this act would result in overall growth of whole globe and are bound to provide benefits to both parties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...ld more actively participate in helping developing nations in these domains. I entirely ag...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ing to curb the spread of disease which if not eradicated will eventually spread t...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ee transportation access to the former. Hence such philanthropic acts are essential f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29370629371 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90395929858 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4425108184 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425766582997 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18133827583 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101116590117 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266271424378 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135647965064 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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