Essay topics:
increasing number of people shopping online. what issues arise from this.
There are several issues raised by online shopping. The main one is some cheaters and duplicates taken place during online shopping. It leads to people loosing their value of money. People can not get worthy things. For instance, people are ordering online branded clothes. but they have been delivered either wrong product or duplicate brand, while some shopping sites does not have replacing facilities.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...le are ordering online branded clothes. but they have been delivered either wrong p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 41.998997996 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 342.0 1615.20841683 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 64.0 315.596192385 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.82842712475 4.20363070211 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25151858476 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 55.0 176.041082164 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.859375 0.561755894193 153% => OK
syllable_count: 108.0 506.74238477 21% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9826341768 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6666666667 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106293671309 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545344806787 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027742468452 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106293671309 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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