Travelling is most fascinating activity nowadays.
Everyone is visiting different country.The question arise is that, what is the reason behind it? There are many postive and negative impacts. I will explain it with possible assumptions
At begin with, there are three advantages. Firstly, according to my point of view, if we want to start new and long lasting business. So, travelling is best option for it. It is best way to expand and explore the business in all over the world. We just select the right methodology of business regarding export import etc. Secondly, travelling is more relevant option for those who has tough and stressful routine. We can spend quality time with our family and friends. Thirdly,travelling promote tourism. It is a good option of earning income. Mark Quirks is the best example of tourist. He travel and promote food all over the world and get higher salary or luxurious life.
On the other hand, it has also few criticizing point. Every country has different culture and during the travel people can easily adopt and influence other culture and spend their life accordingly. Furthermore, black money, corruption are common for government and proverbial person. They steal heritage and open his bank account and build property on the other country. It is the major cause of economy decline. However, people are facing spitful struggle just because of this issue.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, travelling has many postive and negative impacts. Moreover, an advantages are outweighed rather than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19291338583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75665063043 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665354330709 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.334348936 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.9545454545 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5454545455 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136210435768 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342664311955 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364000324491 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061204912897 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272393754869 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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