It has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that smoking has detrimental effects has been proved by science experiments so the majority of country pass the law that smoking should be used certain place in terms of health issues and comfort of non-smoking persons. This essay agrees that all governments should make rules regarding territories of smoking for their citizens. This essay will state that why need a places for smoking and then explain other reasons from perspective of non-smoking individuals.
On the one hand, you imagine that how would you feel waiting with smoking people at a hospital in which is full of smoke. That is feeling of non smoking person. Many of smokers believe that they have a right to smoke where they will but there is really a point that smoke is not a perfume and its smell get into your hair, clothes and of course smoking has harmful effects on your lungs which make you feel bad the next day and can cause some serious illnesses such as cancer, brain damage and asthma. In the middle of 2000’s years Ireland, for example had been first country where passed a law about smoking has to be used in certain places all over the world.
On the other hand, passive smokers could be important issue that has to be taken consideration. If you consider yourself as a non-smoker and standing next to someone who is smoking ,this will affect directly you by way of nose and breath. For instance, according to Doctor Sam Rooney, working in Bristol Research company, 2.1% percent of the UK population is threaten by smoking people throughout the country and this rate has been increasing dramatically day by day.
In conclusion, all governments should focus on requests of both sides and take some measures to solve this vital problem. By doing this, we can create a health and perfect place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ate a health and perfect place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, regarding, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78662420382 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47671004782 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0660751435 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400019839711 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143229951789 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712080441536 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23226763456 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793845313469 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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