Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
In the competitive era, every entrepreneur wants to grow their enterprise to get immense profits.Nowadays,big companies have been using their huge funds for marketing and promotion such as they advertised wisely their products in order to catch the eyes. People are facing umpteen problems which are causing by them .However, some solvents are there to curb this problem .I will portray its problems and some remedies in the following segments.
According to the my point of view ,the predominant problem causing by it is that due to their advertisements people are becoming habituated with the unnecessary shopping because these companies are using all types of communication to influence the tendency of the consumer to purchase the products which they might loaded which could decrease the financial position of the citizens for instance when a person see an advertisement of a smartphone with a high discount then he just purchase the cell phone even though he has bought a new phone recently. In addition, it also put an adverse affect on the local business.because in the modern era,people prefer to purchase the branded things or international things which creates a big threat for local businesses because of the closures of native ventures many of the people are unemployed they are unable to earn their bread .
It is commonly said that prevention is better than cure so there are some remedial measures to curb this problem.Primaily, government urge to the masses that they should use handmade and a domestic things which can also help to booming up the economy of the country and they should Aware the people about the truth of advertisements that these ads may come in a golden cover but are hollow from inside and it is important to see through their motives before embracing them.
To recapitulate ,although large companies bestow their large part of money on promoting their products but the consumers must ensure their need before purchasing them and I cogitate that people need to understand the gravity of the issue and address it immediately before it gets too late
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, then, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08720930233 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92837697785 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584302325581 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.044965522 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.666666667 106.682146367 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.3333333333 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230078183025 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117936945059 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328675370538 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138375794273 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530283132352 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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