It is opined by majority of people that it is a good opportunity to live in a metropolitan city as there are numerous benefits rather than rural areas. I agree with this notion and this essay will highlight the valid reasons to substantiate the same.
Commencing with those who claim that cities are better to live as compared to suburbs. A predominant reason, cities provide human several opportunities which became the life comfortable and effortless. To explicate it, in cities individuals get numerous vacancies as compared to countryside which help them to give better life for their adolescents and their family to fulfill their needs.To epitome,a survey was conducted by Mumbai university in 2019 has revealed that 80% people migrate from rural area to metropolitan cities to live a comfortable life.
Furthermore, in cities there is also a good education system. Due to which children obtain better education to become successful in their lives. Moreover, people also obtain the benefit of supermarkets where they get all the things under one roof which saves their precious time.
Nevertheless, there are many benefits to live in countryside.First and Foremost, at rural area side people get better environment. In other words, individuals obtain fresh air and have healthy lifestyles. Country sides are pollution free which saves people from diseases.To exemplify, it had written in a newspaper that 70% of people live longer as they live in the rural areas.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that living in the sky scrapper building is had more benefits rather than suburbs. However, there are a number of positive benefits which people can not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26394052045 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90657351432 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1390828749 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199971489041 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069648010277 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467459251307 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105946348152 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461475593304 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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