In many countries, the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It is irrefutable that the numbers of the offender are increasing and the offense becomes more furious among society in many countries. There are the plethora of causes of accruing crime in society. I would elaborate briefly and suggest few steps to minimize the prevailing problem in the forthcoming essay.
First and foremost, IN the wake of globalization and revolutionized modern technology, life becomes much easier than before. It is a boom for mankind but when it goes to on wrong-hand it plays the role of a curse. More to it, in this fast-paced era, people befall more materialistic so they tend to take steps to satisfy their desire. For example, in the corporate world, many women employee make extramarital affairs with boss just to climb the corporate ladder or many youngsters commit, robbery or murder just to sort out their monetary needs.
To suggest remedies, the government should take steep steps to mitigate the violence and society should support in it. To exemplify, driving an awareness camp in schools and college for guiding parents and students together about the type of offences and rescue plans, moreover, the government should set strict punishment against serious culprits like the death penalty. Additionally, people also need to be aware of their surroundings and should help each other.
In conclusion, I opine that the government and the society both have to play an important role to demise the number of criminals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13445378151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78951095572 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2751778082 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.090909091 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129760765015 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460492239776 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569019851777 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704189412334 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664495286876 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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