In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Contemporary educational facilities meet a problem related to students’ behavior. This is very important problem, as it can inflict the whole process of studying. In different countries schools and universities found variety of ways to straggle student behavior, however, there are lots of ineffective or inadmissible among them. In this essay I will discuss possible causes of this problem and its solutions.
Nowadays, children become more consumptive and materialistic. They are no longer interested in science, physical development or simple conversation. They tend to coerce parents to buy them different gadgets, expensive clothes to compete with classmates. Besides, parents trying to earn more money and compelled to spend a lot of time at work. As a result, they miss some time to spend with their kids that miss a parents’ guidance. Schools’ tutors can’t teach lessons and control behavior of pupils at the same time. This role should be provided by parents.
The second problem is that contemporary children have too much free time. They should participate different sport activities after classes in order to physical development. Such sport activities, as swimming, running, football allow children to spend their energy and decrease excessive activity during lessons at school or university.
There is also very important aspect we need to take into account. Its related to teachers or parents correctional act. If they don’t like the behavior of their kid, they can’t come to rude methods of parenting, such as beating, abusing, scolding. There are lots of examples from real life, when little boy or girl became a criminal, because he or she had an abusive parent. Thus, children shouldn’t be afraid of parents. They ought to understand how they needs to behave.
In conclusion, the harsh problems with students’ behavior caused by modern values of life. To avoid this problems, parents should pay more attention to their kids’ guidance and don’t use severe methods of education.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262086513995 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.150127226463 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0916030534351 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0229007633588 0.0501214627716 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0534351145038 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0992366412214 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.027989821883 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.01711589157 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0432569974555 0.0326793684256 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0432569974555 0.0861772015684 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0203562340967 0.021408717616 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00508905852417 0.011925033212 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2052.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.49367088608 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424050632911 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.351265822785 0.28420135186 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.262658227848 0.203846283523 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167721518987 0.137316102897 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01711589157 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.037074148 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 75.2652633342 60.7387585426 124% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3636363636 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4225084924 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 49.4902186421 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.7191011236 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174167630879 0.332605444948 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0509129538962 0.102741220458 50% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0530492671122 0.0668466124924 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441286000825 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141559159013 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594814311399 0.134430193775 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590338168759 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.230792586714 0.324371583561 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0423042033705 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119764083674 0.228012699653 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718185744196 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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