Many offenders commit more crimes after first punishment. Why this is happening and what measures should be taken to tackle this problem?
It is commonly argues that many criminals do more offences once they have come out from prison. This essay will outline certain causes, like Lack of rehabilitation and unemployment behind this situation. In addition, this essay will also propose plausible solutions to curb this issue, such as proper training programs and social support by people.
To begin with, constant avoidance by people and lack of jobs are two prime reasons behind the increasing crimes. In other words, once any criminal comes out from jail, people do not accept and support them to live their normal life. Moreover, their record in crimes doesn’t allow them to get better jobs with good wages and this would make them unable to satisfy the basic needs of their families. As a result, they commit second crimes, such as bribery and fraud to fulfill need of family.
To tackle this alarming issue, the conscious efforts by government should be taken in terms of arranging training programs to uphill skills which would make them able to get well paid jobs which strengthen their financial position. Furthermore, all the efforts from local bureaucrats will not result in positives unless it is supported by people. To be more specific, pupils should change their behavior and views for such criminals. Eventually, this will lead to well acceptance of criminals who really want to live their rest life peacefully. For instance, the government of Gujarat has taken wonderful initiative in 2017 to train offenders who were engaged in some offense and this has opened doors for better opportunity which reduces crime rate in the state in 2018.
In conclusion, it is often observed that criminals come out of lock-up to commit crime second time. This essay has discussed chief causes, such as unemployment and people’s response for such people. This problem could be tackled by appropriate initiatives to up bring their skill to get better career opportunity and well acceptance in society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59430554871 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1842606466 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22670661203 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734510553052 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484806054921 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141815947458 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527331819802 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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