Many people these days have computers, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think working from home has advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.
Advancement in technology had changed people style of living. Presently, some people have electronic gadgets such as desktops, laptops and mobile phones available at their residence to do their tasks. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of working offline.
Working from home has several benefits, which has made people workload lighter. To begin with, working in a quiet and comfortable place could improve work efficiency. If a person is working under a loud noise environment, it is hard to focus on work and get the task accomplished on time. For example, the writer is always looking for a place away from a crowd such as hilly areas or place where the population are very less, and then they can concentrate on their work and get it to finish in a particular period. Furthermore, it saves valuable time by eliminating the traveling time and stuck down in the morning rush hours. Moreover, a person can use this time in doing productive jobs and increase their financial rewards.
However, there are some drawbacks to work from home. Firstly, while doing essential jobs, it is a must to have privacy around them, but sometimes people face this problem and do not able to understand how to tackle it. For example, anonymous ringing at the doorbell can cause disturbance as well as it creates the gap while performing any critical assignment. Lastly, even though working from is convenient, but many times it has an impact on personal life because sometimes a person gets too much involved in the work can result in less concentration on family hours.
In conclusion, working from home would have advantages and disadvantages for many people depending upon their work nature as well as how they manage it, where it depends solely on a person how they make work from home into an effective way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ly, while doing essential jobs, it is a must to have privacy around them, but sometimes...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in less concentration on family hours. In conclusion, working from home would h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96753246753 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70008089432 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4135502871 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388189663595 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131840434422 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900676803483 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253058150247 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570666616649 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.