Many people think that money brings happiness, but others think that having too much money is a problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is no harm in saying that given topic over "relation of money and happiness" grabs immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. There are two dimensions of this argument. Some people believe that money can buy everything including happiness, whereas, other group of people assert that too much money eventually creates problems. I do not agree to the opinion that money brings happiness and i support the philosophy that too much money is a problem . Let's discuss both school of thoughts in detail to reach to conclusive verdict.
To begin with, these days money is the core factor that bring change in one's life. People are striving to collect more and more amount of money in order to enhance their life style, their living standard & stand in the line of elite people. Every passing day, people are getting more materialistic and urge to collect as much money as they can. There is no doubt in admitting that money does bring happiness, but the point to understand here that everyone has different meanings of happiness. For instance, people living in deserted areas, for them having meal 3 times a day & clean water is happiness, whereas a person of high class society, for him happiness is visiting 3 to 4 countries in a year or buying a new model luxury car. To elucidate the point further, there are certain people who have a lot of money but that cannot bring happiness to them. For instance a high class couple enjoys every luxury of life but do not have any children, is not a happy couple. For the couple happiness is having children.
On the other hand, it is an evident fact that too much creates problem if not rightly spent or invested. A person has collected good amount of money and is not spending in correct manner or not sharing with needy people would be of no use. The rational approach is to utilize your money that you adequately required for your personal consumption and share a portion to the deprived people. Amount collected through wrong means would consequently put one's into trouble. Lust of money is nothing but a waste of time. For instance, people spend their whole life is collecting money & neglect their health, eventually fell sick & all the savings are spent of medical expenditures.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, we should understand that the purpose of living is not to collect money but to spend life in a useful manner in such a way that it provides benefits to not only one's self but surroundings as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80140186916 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63124017165 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530373831776 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1409964814 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324166582791 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101593623508 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808972358569 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190012552826 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102858786411 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.