In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
In recent times, the advancement in urbanisation and industrialisation have increased the accommodation issues in many countries. The space to live-in is decreasing drastically in many areas, particularly in metropolitan cities. In this situation, a group of people still holds the view that the authorities should not permit to build houses on countrysides. In my opinion, though, protection of animal inhabitants of rural areas is vital, however, human needs come first.
To begin with, cities are already crowded and wasting a lot of time of dwellers. To clarify, if authorities do not permit to develop housing societies to cope up the fundamental needs of people, the standard of living will be diminished further. Cities are already overcrowded, and traffic congestion is an inevitable part of contemporary life of citizens. Further increase in the population of cities will add-up more issues in the life of dwellers. For instance, in Japan, on average, a citizen spends 4 hours in commute from home to the workplace. This, in result, significantly increases the depression in their lives. This notion further aided by the fact that Japnese authorities have now made it official to take a power-nap during duty hours.
In addition to this, residential space will become extremely expensive. Currently, accommodation in many megacities costs dwellers an arm and a leg. Further increase in population will burden the citizens more, and it will become almost impossible to pay massive rents to live in cities. For instance, in Hong Kong, the accommodation is so expensive that people are living in miserable conditions, even paying hefty rents. As the demand will increase more, the landlord will start charging more rents from tenants to exploit their needs.
To conclude, the evidence cited above provide enough support to conclude that to keep providing people with reasonable living conditions, authorities must allow the construction of houses countryside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'building'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: building
... that the authorities should not permit to build houses on countrysides. In my opinion, ...
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Line 1, column 462, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs come" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'come' or 'to be come'.
Suggestion: come; to be come
...al areas is vital, however, human needs come first. To begin with, cities are a...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
...o clarify, if authorities do not permit to develop housing societies to cope up the fundam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43181818182 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07907774622 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1877327568 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4117647059 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126664474438 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387008361746 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285522976034 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731446444404 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339872125768 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.