The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many people think the media should spend more time on good news is questionable. I agree with this argument, although I believe bad news has its advantages.
On the one hand, I think it is necessary to broadcast bad news, as this helps people to raise their awareness on natural disasters. Taking news of Covid-19 as an example. If the announcement of Coronavirus were not shown on TV, the number of tolls had to be more dramatic than the real number because people had no ideas about the existence of the virus. They might get sick without symptoms and then transit viruses to others when going out. Moreover, when the national TV channels tell us sad news relating the pandemic, such as the desperation of workers due to mass layoffs as a result of restrictions on recreation places, audience may feel stressful, but they are also reminded about the severe impacts of Covid-19 widespread. Thanks for that, they will comply with rules of social distancing and mask wearing as the government recommended.
On the other hand, I would argue that good news need to be shown more to help the audience to keep positive emotions and avoid negative actions when dealing with disasters. First, besides death numbers of Covid-19, the media can also make interviews about doctors who often work overtime in hazardous conditions to save millions of lives. By watching these interviews, audience would feel grateful for the sacrifice of doctors and have more believes on human. Second, the media should avoid unnecessary bad news to prevent causing panics for people. For example, if people think the lockdown due to Coronavirus causes a lack of food, they may get in line to buy as much food as they can, which spreads more virus in community.
In conclusion, I believe that bad news on the media is needed to inform us what are happening around the world. However, I would say that the media should focus more on good news because of its advantages.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80177514793 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56763998896 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5835016593 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203389551774 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771279606605 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718397419 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165608241571 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805730481433 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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