Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does the issue have on the society?
The number of students opting to study science courses in universities around the world today are not as many as should be because undergraduates these days, choose to study in other fields due to some reasons that will be discussed in this essay as well the effect this has on the community.
Although, there may be several reasons why students opt for other fields of study, lack of interest in science due to the duration of study is one of the many reasons people read other courses. In recent times, with the advancement in technology, the younger generations are geared towards studying I.T related courses rather than spend numerous years training to become scientists. For example, it will take less than four years to obtain a certificate in software development. However, scientists spend longer years training to become one. Also, studying a science related course has a proven track record of been a highly demanding career path which over time, does not give back commensurate and profitable returns notwithstanding the efforts put into the process.
As a result of the choices college students make in choosing their careers, the community suffers in several ways. For example, a shortfall of staff will be experienced in various fields of science while the I.T sector and other popularly selected fields may be oversaturated resulting in low availability of jobs. Additionally, the society ends up channeling funds meant for the development of the community into sponsoring expatriates to carry out basic science projects.
To conclude, college students are increasingly making career choices outside the field of science because they do not desire it and also do not consider it a profitable venture. This has impacted the society negatively by causing the scientific sector huge drawbacks also costing large sums to hire experts to do simple science jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21122112211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81502094652 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.804931292 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.545454545 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230769213618 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077131415312 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624876450777 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140774050581 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555981596833 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.