These days, most of the families are migrating to foreign countries to pursue their career opportunities. Few people think that, it opens the new doors to their children future and others opine that, it is more challenging for the predecessors of the immigrant families. In this essay, I will discuss both views before drawing cogent solution.
On one hand, There are plenty of problems associated with migration to other countries. Firstly, the immigrant family and the dependents must cope up with the concept called racism, that existed in all well established countries. There the settlers were in the perception like the foreigners and their children are grabbing their jobs, immigrants must combat with them for every single right. Secondly, discrimination is one more big concern for the existence of the immigrant families, discrimination is existed from the educational institutions to multi national companies. The entire immigrating family must be aware of this before pushing themselves. Finally, foreigners are always treated as aliens, they must forget about their heritage and tradition, even the government will show prejudice when allocating their sops to their citizens.
On other hand, we must not deny the fact that, there are few advantages with migration to the other countries. The immigrated family and their children can relish the cultural diversity, they can explore new traditions and cultures. This will provide the opportunity where they can broaden their horizons by improving their communal and socializing skills. Another prominent advantage with migration is we can eradicate unemployment and one can earn colossal amount, and their children can lead their life fully without any regrets and the governing bodies also accommodating their budget for full filling the basic needs. Finally, the children may have various career options in the developed countries, they can pick the one by their own interest and enthusiasm.
To sum up with, as the coin has two sides, migration to foreign countries too has plethora of pros and cons. I completely opine that, children may have bright future in the developed countries as their government is providing the basic needs with free of cost or at least as cheaper as possible this is not the case with developing and poor countries. And the children may have many options for their survival.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31914893617 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76229298994 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539893617021 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8083720822 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.647058824 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195374794151 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770888246717 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513977824951 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14790153306 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733532747833 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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