In today’s era, people spend most of the time outside their homes. In my opinion, by understanding the reasons of this phenomenon may lead us to understand the effects that it causes.
To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that we are living in a materialistic world. To satisfy the extravagance desires, people work round the clock in the office in a hope of getting promotions and better paychecks. In turn, in middle class family both parents work to make both ends meet. Eventually, they spend less time in their houses. Additionally, students also suffer from peer pressure. Top-notch universities and companies do not only require A grades but also extra curricular activities. For instance, Oxford University usually give an admission to a pupil, who is not only excel in academics but also have done some charitable work. Therefore, students nowadays work after schools and colleges to get a coveted spot in renowned colleges and companies. Eventually, these children and teenagers also spend substantial time outside their homes.
This tendency has some effects on individual and society. Individuals are more isolated than they were in past. This is because they spend most of their time to perform better. Subsequently, they live stressful lives and their health deteriorates with time. Simultaneously, This phenomenon adversely affects the society. In the past, public had good work life balance. Hence, social functions and celebrations were done with tremendous amount of energy. However, now the norms have changed. People do not even know the names of their neighbors’.
To conclude, I pen down by saying that there couple of reasons such as yearn to earn more and competition in education and corporate world that induces people to spend more time out of homes. And the end results are isolated people living on their own in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20462046205 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87760013096 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5702087127 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6818181818 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7727272727 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223503148757 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605951375361 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547885369082 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140528398218 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390406048032 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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