Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?
Around the world, the entertainment industry has grown dynamically with the advent of groundbreaking media technologies. Many celebrities are paid their remunerations as per their popularity among their fans. I completely agree with the assertion as their sponsors and producers are earning tremendous from these actors, singers, and sportsmen.
The popularity of celebrities is worldwide these days among millions of people which raise their demand and make them the most expensive to hire their services. As a result, they prefer to work with those companies which could offer them a best deal. Cristiano Ronaldo, Lionel Messi, Tailor swift, and Shah Rukh Khan, for instance, have offers from a number of brands to work with due to their huge fan following but they only choose to work with those who could offer them good. That is how they get too much money for their services.
There are many jobs like nursing, teaching, old homes caretakers jobs are more compassionate and deserve to be paid well. People who are serving humanity on any ground should be paid well to motivate them to continue their sincere services. Subsequently, it would help to bring betterment to our society. Rather illustrative examples are western countries like the United Kingdom, Sweden, Norway, and Finland where they appreciate such employees who are attached to jobs where they serve the society directly. For example, Janitor, Sweeper, Peon, and security guard.
The conclusion to be drawn is that world-famous celebrities are getting paid too high because of their huge popularity among the masses; however, those people should be paid handsomely who are directly serving humanity to ameliorate society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33457249071 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72434152273 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6109916409 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184065807845 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064462628639 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637436633655 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12132901485 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606935368665 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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