Nowadays young people want more freedom and they pay little or no attention towards the older people's advice.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
We are living in a time where everything is changing very rapidly. Due to the technological boom and globalization, everyone has access to all the information regarding life-style, culture, education and recent issues. People from all over the world are trying to go with the recent trend. Young people are more adaptive to these changes. They want freedom like everyone else from all age groups, which is quite normal. I disagree with the statement that young people choose their freedom over older people's advice.
There will always be a generation gap. This is perfectly normal. For example, every father thinks his son does not listen to him; whereas, every son thinks that his father does not understand him. With the advancement of time and technology, people will change. There will be a change in thinking, habits, and lifestyle. Young people are prone to adapt to new trends. They are using the internet for any kind of information they need. They do not depend on elders or teachers to know something. They also want freedom in their decision making. However, at the same time, they consider their elder's advice. This is a common scenario for every aspect of our life. For example, in case of choosing the subject and institution for study, they always consider older people's opinions. We can certainly cook by watching videos but if anything goes wrong, we rush to hear from the older people. Also, in the case of child-rearing, older people are the last resort for us. We also depend on older people for taking decisions for our careers. Older people are so experienced that even if they have little learning, they can share their experiences about their successes and failures, which can help us to make the right decision. Moreover, nobody can deny the popular saying, "Mommy knows best."
However, there might be some people who think that older people's advice is of no use. This is because they are outdated in terms of new technologies. They lacked resources like gadgets for household and other works.
To sum up, we can say that every age has its own beauty. Older people are more prudent than young people. Also, as they are not our competitors in any way, they will give us the best advice for us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n elders or teachers to know something. They also want freedom in their decision mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88976377953 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48066072664 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5088612914 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5357142857 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6071428571 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17857142857 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 3.4128256513 527% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304183460991 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880200127202 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852772011609 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196948547872 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482892053004 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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