In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
The trend of shopping has transformed from being a routine household activity to a leisure pursuit for many people in recent years. In my opinion, I think that this transformation can have a negative impact on both individuals and the society.
Admittedly, increased number of potential buyers affect commercial market positively as it creates more business opportunities. In other words, business entities look towards expanding their business which can ultimately earn more revenue. For example, Nike has multiple outlets all over the world due to increasing number of customers. However, there are many other ways to earn greater returns than from shopaholic people.
Nevertheless, I am of the view that impulsive shopping can create financial challenges for such families. Not many individuals, presently, have greater amount of disposable income and may end up running out of money, if not spent wisely, which ultimately leads towards securing bank loans. For instance, 30% adults in the UK who regard shopping as a hobby are in debt as they cannot manage their expenses efficiently.
Another point to consider is that addictive shopping creates large amount of waste as well, as people tend to discard their old belongings when they buy new ones. This poses a threat not only to the environment but to the government as well since it incurs a huge cost to dispose and recycle the waste along with consumption of raw materials to meet increased demands. For instance, 15% of the annual budget of India is dedicated towards operating their landfills and waste collection units.
In conclusion, the challenges to the buyers and the community brought by following the hobby of extensive shopping have made this pursuit more detrimental which indeed is not a positive development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3006993007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85828414503 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2974609285 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138395801985 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046446215204 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456499764637 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811585878484 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521152385333 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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