People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
Different views exist considering employees working hours. Some believe people should only work for an exact amount of time each week and not be asked to continue their job for extra hours. However, others argue that this limitation conflicts with the company interest since to meet a deadline or avert a crisis they have no choice than demanding their staff to stay for several more hours. Nevertheless, in my opinion, the former idea seems more appealing as I will express my reasoning in the following.
First of all, the purpose of work is to provide people with money so that they can live. Therefore, why should one bother to work if they do not get to live? Waking up early in the morning and coming back home late at night does not considered a healthy life by any standard. Fixating the working hours help employees especially workaholic to go home on time and plan for their leisure time. Spending quality time with family members and friends help individuals to unwind which in turn results in healthier happier staff. In addition, studies show the happier the employees, the more successful the company.
Secondly, without having a specific number of hours in place, employees get confused and often enter an unhealthy competition to prove their worth by spending more and more time in the office. Although, on the first glimpse, it may seem that businesses are going to benefit from such rivalry, it is the exact opposite and examples demonstrate the harmful effect of such toxic environment. For an instance, those who cannot work extra hours feel inadequate and unsatisfied with themselves and their job. On the other hand, ones who have drowned themselves in their work feel being used and demand more benefits from the company which have become their whole life.
In conclusion, determining a fixed working hours is beneficial for both workers and their employers. In the short run it may seem extreme and damaging for businesses. However, in the long run companies get more successful as healthy employees are much more effective, innovative, and fresh-minded than the overworked staffs.
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Suggestion: hour
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04273504274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59682819844 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.734176575 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.117647059 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21252038211 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678643490394 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523433065105 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129536136473 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289728785194 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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