Ques: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is justified while other thinks it is unfair.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Well- settled sportsmen get an ample remuneration as compared to other vocations. Owing to this, it is considered by some that money they get is justifiable, while other thinks that this practice is partial. This essay will discuss both sides of arguments in detail and provide evidence why high sum of money to the successful sports person is agreeable.
On the one hand, some people believe that high salary to sportsmen is like a fruit for their struggle and sacrifice they have to face and I agree. To reach at the zenith of their career,they have to struggle a lot.Like,they have to practice hard 24/7 for many years irrespective of extreme weather conditions.Also, at this stage of life they have to sacrifice family life as they hardly get to spend quality time with them because of strict schedule.Furthermore,they can’t roam around free anywhere b they want , because every time a paparazzi may be following them.Thus, owing to hard work and sacrifice their immense money holds ground.
On the other hand , few argue against this viewpoint.they support their view by saying that successful sportsperson get s a huge amount of money from brand endorsement apart from their regular pay , which is also too high.They argued that sport authorities should spend money on uplifting of other sports, so that it may give chance to other deserving person.For example, government can buy more advanced equipments and build more sport stadiums with this spare money.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that high payment to sports professionals is reasonable ought to their hard work ans sacrifice they put in. However , authorities should also supervise its finances so that other sports person also gets benefit of services.
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...endorsement apart from their regular pay , which is also too high.They argued that...
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...s person also gets benefit of services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13780918728 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02404901815 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.931234746 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.75 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.375 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198125678858 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976969659862 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713984966125 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136845539318 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841464466968 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.