In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping
IS it a positive or negative development?
It is a well-known fact that globalization changing every aspects of our world. The question, however, arises, is the small local shops are still play important role in our society or we should be surrounded only by big global brands. In this essay I will attempt to discuss both sides of the view and provide relevant examples.
First and foremost, big shopping malls have many benefits for the customer. For example, only by traveling to one shopping centre we can visit many different small shops inside. This allow people to save a lot of time. In today's world people have very hectic lives. Moreover, shopping centres might be focused on very special customer. For instance, in Dubai there is open mall on street with luxury shops just for rich customers. In addition, shopping malls provide great place to promote big brand in their areas.
On the other hand, small shops also have plenty of advantages. Firstly, the product in local shops are usually more sophisticated it can be even handmade. There are many small bakeries or even cloths shops selling handcrafted items. Besides, local shops are usually in convenience localization so we can get to them on foot. Many times when people are missing just one thing to prepare diner or to fix something at home they prefer to go to nearby shop.
In conclusion, I believe that big shopping mall have plenty advantages and give people a lot of opportunities by offering big range of products and entertainment but there will be always place for small local shops with handmade products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ing to one shopping centre we can visit many different small shops inside. This allow people t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89237668161 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4715233517 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632286995516 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8203762256 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299270980337 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102495279363 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693554224029 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189257371835 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849160784109 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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