Although poor nations take money from the richer one,yet the poverty of that countries still remains constant.So,it is suggested that developed countries should provide the financial aid or other help to undeveloped countries in order to tackle with that problem s.In my point of view help with money is not a good Mathod to reduce poverty in poor nations.This essay intends to elaborate the reason of my agreement.
To commence with basic needs of human are food,home and clothes.To fulfill this rich countries must provide food and rest of other things for needy nation instead of money.The bad economic system is one of the reason for that.People at high positions consume the money for their needs and never give that for other people .However,it can be replaced by essential things which can easily provided to poor people.
Furthermore,rich countries can open the hospital and medication facilities to overcome the Heath problem in other countries and pay by themselves.By doing this,fitness level of poor people become good.Even more,theses countries can provide the job facilities in order to succeed other countries.For this they can establish the small factories and shops by virtue of which one can earn money and thus,reduce the poverty level of that country.
To conclude,no doubt,money ,being the permanent part of life,is quite essential for mankind ,but,it can not reduce the widening gap between poor and rich countries.so, help of poor countries without money is appropriate idea.
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- In some cultures the old age is more valued, while in some cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 87
- Some people think that young people should go to universities to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc, to serve society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31932773109 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87306487931 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4186756436 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 316.5 106.682146367 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.5 20.7667163134 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279921848467 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176475087411 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433583291846 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176475087411 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433583291846 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 13.0946893788 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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