Adequate safety measurements must be taken into consideration, when residential apartments are constructed, to avoid occurrence of any unpleasant incident. Generally, standards which are concerned with the safety of all residents in the area, must be ensured by the government. However, for some, people can have their freedom of choice, whether to implement that particular strategy for their safety or not.
As such, authorities must provide guidelines to the builders, for the quality of materials to be used for the construction process. If material is found of inferior quality, it should be banned for use. Other things which are to be ensured by the governing bodies are, the obligatory installation of fire extinguishers and smoke detectors in homes. Government should also assist people by providing the information regarding earthquake prone areas and also set the number of storeys to be allowed while building homes in a specific area.
People should also be aware about the safety codes and what they can do in this direction is, the use of equipment to avoid malfunctioning of electricity and gas supply. Besides this, whether to equip their homes with CCTV cameras or to use automatic locks and doors, is solely their individual decision. Government should not make any compulsions for such arrangements.
To conclude, safety assurance should be the first priority of government as well as masses while building new homes. Initially, It will seem time consuming and tedious to spend money on such practices, but in the long run, citizens wil feel safer in case of mishappenings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... set the number of storeys to be allowed while building homes in a specific area....
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., whether to equip their homes with CCTV cameras or to use automatic locks and do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30196078431 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98519736473 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8428017434 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278671478272 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967878452446 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638883460986 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156895552017 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315056224046 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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