Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Some employers provide uniforms for their staff which need to be worn at all times. Although offering uniforms to their employees put an enormous strain on the company’s budget, however, this essay believes that it brings unity among the employees.
On the one hand, wearing uniforms at the office often creates an extraordinary rapport between colleagues. This is because when all of them wear same clothes it eradicates social indifference among them and they consider each other equally. This eventually helps to create bonding between them that, in turn, improves their productivity. For instance, as per a survey conducted by Union welfare association of India, it was disclosed that the uniform culture in the office removed the disputes among the staffs that related to economic status and yield greater results. This essay completely agrees with this point of view because it benefits both employer and employee in creating a positive workplace.
On the other hand, the company needs to allocate funds for providing uniforms to their employees which effects their company’s revenue. That is to say, many companies often have a large number of people and providing uniforms to all requires a huge amount of money to be allocated from the company’s annual budget which prevents the company from spending on other necessary factors as employee insurance and annual increment. For example, a recent report from the Indian Stakeholder’s board disclosed that ACL, a leading company spends nearly two-fifth of their annual budget in providing uniforms to their employees which negatively impacts in an employee’s annual increments. However, I believe that the employee’s positive attitude towards work should be given high priority.
To conclude, providing uniforms to the staff's demands funds from the company’s account, however, I believe that wearing uniforms improves bonding among employees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 184, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...at is to say, many companies often have a large number of people and providing uniforms to all re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60338983051 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94884081735 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2888879434 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264224737627 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115284973144 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124423321117 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181205756971 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100662742414 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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