In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is undeniably true that the consumption of junk food by white-colored employees has mushroomed in recent years. As a result of this, health issues are raising profoundly. However, the government is keen on diminishing the intake of this by imposing the tax. In my view, it is crucial that authorities have to minimize the ramifications by levying additional fares on processed food.

To embark upon, due to technological evolution, various kinds of sedentary jobs have been created such as software employees and BPOs. These job holders tend to continually work on the projects and their related issues and they end up with less time to take care of themselves. Therefore, they don’t have time to prepare home food and highly dependent on processed food. As a result, they are suffering from various diseases. A recent study from a renowned university proved that health problems have raised 12% because of these hazardous foods.

In addition to this, a significant number of health professionals suggested that the government has to add extra fairs to street foods such as burgers, pizzas, and Donuts. Recently, one of the states in India has applied the same concept and it resulted in a positive way. The utilization of prepackaged food has been decreased significantly. However, the administration needs to consider promoting healthy food by lessening the prices of fresh vegetables and fruits.

To conclude, Junk food consumption is perilous to the health of mankind. Therefore, although the government is imposing taxes on these, it is important to encourage the consumption of fresh fruits.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pplied the same concept and it resulted in a positive way. The utilization of prepackaged food ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26744186047 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0418751827 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7288772039 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24269457825 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866553546934 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412122819422 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147614943942 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185692208744 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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