In some nations, specially India, people prefer to live with their father and mother after completion of their graduation and getting employed. This phenomenon has both pros and cons. In my opinion, its pitfalls outweigh its advantages. Moral support to parents and getting skipped with household chores are the plus points whereas uncomfortable to manage expenses in later age, becoming dependent and incapable of taking decisions are negatives of the same.
Firstly, parents are happy when their children stay with them during their old age. It not only gives them moral help but also motivation to live happily with the family. Also, adults feel glad because they get daily home cooked food and need not to worry about routine work being done in house such as washing clothes, cooking food and buying grocery and so on. As a result, individuals are relaxed enough to concentrate on their career aspirations and goals of future. In some or other way, living with ancestors is blessing for them.
However, staying with ancestors become unfavorable when it comes to its consequences. Adults, who are always in home, become very indecisive as they are not able to decide on any crucial decision because of parents' interference in each and every matter. For small matters even, they are dependent on their guardians. One of the major consequence of this is that they are not able to manage when it is time to make quick actions. Moreover, persons who have never gone outside to stay with their age companions do not learn to adjust with others because of adaptability issues as they receive everything in plate according to them in house and at the same time, individuals are unable to manage their expenses with their own because it is always in hands of elder ones in the family. This lead to unsocial and frustrated individuals.
To conclude, considering all the above facts, although staying in home is advantageous in some way but at the same time, it leads to more negative consequences. Thus, disadvantages outweigh its benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
...get daily home cooked food and need not to worry about routine work being done in house ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, thus, whereas, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63227242729 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585294117647 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9885454444 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.235294118 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296469563317 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086382151559 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462313020717 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169738196407 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219923809555 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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