Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Media is considered as an important factor in the society and we noticed that in the last decades , marketing and advertising are crucial for business growth. However in my opinion, I see that most of the methods used are unprofessional and have a negative impacts on the society.
On the first hand, we noticed that woman plays an important role in any publicity. Actually even if the item being advertised is not related to female she is still there. Moreover, the way her body is exposed for the audience is not right and sometimes should not be seen by youngsters. Consequently, we will have a bad impact on the society since no limitations are put in place to prevent those types of advertising. For instance many teenagers will become excited once they see those pictures and try to search for other advertisement related to the same field.
On the second hand, child is also considered an important factor in the media. Since people will become very sensitive when seeing an infant , Media company benefits from this point and tries to use them as much as it is can be done . Let's take an example of a charity company that is helping people with leukemia , in order for the donations to be huge , pictures for children taking the treatment is always used . As a result other children seeing those infants will become depressed and feel that their turn will come after
In conclusion, although media has a big effect in advertising and marketing, we should keep a close eyes on what and how is being advertised to prevent bad effects in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63172950871 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1416054215 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987591870878 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368785308241 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368545016736 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073184638144 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353055871582 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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