Some parents think that it is good to have mobile phones for their children, others disagree with it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Mobile technology advancement has dramatically changed people lifestyle in today's era. Some parents agree that it is acceptable to have cellphone to their children but others disagree to them. However I believe that children should not allow to carry mobile in schools. There are several reasons for my opinion,
Firstly, If parents allows use of phone to their children, which is somewhat helpful in terms of their safety and security. For Instance If there is emergency situation (like flood or natural calamities) and their family members wants to contact children immediately. Also, In some cases both father and mother are working and they willing to call their children in their office time. According to survey done by survey monkey, The 90% individuals were happy and work efficiently at workplace if they talked with their children in their lunch break.
On the other hand, there are many drawbacks to not having cell phone to the children. The children may possessive to mobile technology and not able to concentrate on their studies and exercises which is surely not better for their academic.
If they spend much of their time in browsing and playing games on mobile phone they can not have spare time for physical exercise and do social activities with their friends in their neighborhood. For example, they are not able to mix up with friends and society therefore they are lack of social skills and outside communication.
To sum of on above reasons, I strongly believe that every parents shouldn't permit their children to have mobile phones. Their age is for educational, social and physical development and parents should promote them for different activities like school sports or reading book in library. Once they got educated they ultimately familiar with mobile technology at their workplace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20677966102 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60497832894 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1361512695 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368211904369 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141725415635 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705488719735 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225803735595 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04269624516 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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