Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
Everyone in his life wants to became famous. That may be in the field of education, sports or any of the performing art. There is a no age bar for becoming a famous person, apart from adults there are plethora of example of famous child prodigies. In my opinion to become famous in adolescence is not a bad thing at all until unless the do not deviate from their path.
To embark on, some people become very famous at very young age because of their talent or dedication that is not ubiquitous among the other people of same age. To substantiate this, Malala Yousufzai is the best example, she is the youngest person to receive Nobel Prize for peace. She is a child activist who raised her voice for education of girls in region that was controlled by Taliban a terrorist outfit. She even got attacked but escaped miraculously. Nowadays, she is working from England for various other social causes. In education field there are many genius' that are world renowned for their contribution, for example Srinivasa Ramanujan who without any formal training in mathematics gave many theorems at a very young age and eventually become famous mathematician in world. From above mentioned examples it is clear that if a person is famous at young age and with proper guidance they can soar new heights of success in their life.
On the flip side, if the energy of such people is not properly channelized, they can destroy their skills. We have seen many young child artists in field of singing and movies lost their shine and slowly disappeared from the silver screens. This is because such people were not able to cope up with their celebrity status. Instead of polishing their skills further the enjoyed their stardom and another more talented person replaced them. Similar is the case with sports persons also, once they get a celebrity status, they get indulged in money making process by endorsing brands, which effect their game.
To conclude i would like to say that to be well known person at juvenile age is dream for many people, but those have attained this status should be careful to maintain that.
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...which effect their game. To conclude i would like to say that to be well known...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, apart from, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79452054795 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42719316375 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578082191781 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.419975115 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261470598526 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746047954646 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972175518237 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145824427035 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999067465539 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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