Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that death sentence should not be carried out, while others believe that it should be dedicated to those who only commit a very serious crime.
In honest opinion, I believe that the capital punishment should be dedicated to those who only commit a very serious crime and personally think that without it very serious crime will be seen more often.
There are many reasons why some people believe that the capital punishment should be carried out. Firstly, death sentence can limit the amount of very serious crime cases directly or indirectly. In other words, those who should perform such a crime will be afraid and think many times about the consequences of committing it. A good illustration of that, is the wold wide known criminal Pablo Eskobar. Secondly, Capital punishment can bring a minimal sense of satisfaction and belief in the justice system especially to those who suffered or to the relatives of those suffered. Moreover, some people believe that a very serious crime offender should not be just in prison but does not deserve a life at all. Therefore, the death sentence is the only justified punishment as well as to reinforce the justice system and to prevent such a crime occur in the future.
On the other hand, others have many arguments why capital punishment should not be used. To begin with, public do not trust the justice system due to corruption or not having enough justified accusations that could lead to life loss of innocent person. Therefore, life sentence in prison should be the maximum punishment. In addition, breaking human rights can be another reason why a life loss should not be used as a punishment.
In conclusion, it can not be denied that capital punishment causes a life loss to a human being. However, it should be dedicated to those who only commit a very serious crime as both a method of punishment as well as prevention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...us crime as both a method of punishment as well as prevention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86111111111 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57211748773 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441358024691 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0488574803 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417718764235 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169863132709 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11544172943 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288170416446 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334858744612 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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