Some people believe that men and women are equal so women should be able to do any job they want and others feels that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women What is your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people believe that men and women are equal so women should be able to do any job they want and others feels that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

For so many centuries, women advocates have battled for equality and thus equal opportunity for any job position. Nevertheless, some people do believe that some occupations are not appropriate for female generation. As a woman who have faced similar limitation, strongly believe that there should be no restriction regarding career opportunity for any gender.

Firstly, women are capable of doing anything if they truly want to. There are dozens of examples proving this statement. For example, for a long time some jobs were considered too tough or too dangerous for female population to take on such as heavy car driving or mining. Take judging as another example, women could not be selected as judges since they were labeled too emotional even and illogical. However, nowadays we can see not only lots of women doing those jobs but also excelling at them. Therefore, it is only fair to let individuals find their passion regardless of their gender since in the end it is the society that benefits from a well-performed citizen.

Secondly, if for a second we accept this horrible theory, who is going to draw a line and decide what is suitable or not? Based on which evidences one should impose such limitation. After all, women are not similar to each other in terms of physical, intellectual or emotional abilities. While one job may seem challenging and even dangerous for some women, it may be a piece of cake for others. By making the decision based on the first group, the second one would be deprived of an opportunity. Hence, there is no way, one could determine the suitability of a job without being unfair. Thus, it is more logical to leave the decision to the individuals themselves since they are the only ones who know what is best for them.

In conclusion, no one should be banned from realizing their dream jobs because of their gender. People have different strengths and weaknesses which only they are aware of. Hence, everyone is entitled to have equal rights, and make its own decisions.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2520.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.70212765957 5.12529762239 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.35891452252 2.80592935109 191% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550531914894 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2204800964 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.631578947 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126425351822 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731764350616 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545930879898 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102835106619 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190091544797 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.58 12.4159519038 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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