Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice. 1- Intro, 2 - job satisfaction, passion 3 - salary, my view
In today’s era work has become an integral part of one’s life and it is hard to deny the effect it has on individual’s way of life. Some are of view that salary is the most important factor of job, but others believe the kind of work one engages in also very essential.
According to me, having passion and interest for work is mandatory. If an individual has no liking for his/her job, soon that work would lead to boredom and more of liability. For instance, being employed as a teacher is tedious job with lots of patience and responsibility. If a person does not enjoy what they are doing, it will not only affect their own performance, but also the students future who are relying on those professionals for gaining knowledge. This is not limited to teaching even other professions like doctors, engineers, pilots etc needs to be passionate for their work. So one’s commitment and interest towards their profession is important aspect of work.
On the other hand, salary is another motivating factor for many people. Money is a priority and necessity for majority as this would bring them bread at home. In the current scenario there are ample of unemployment issues going on due to which people leave their passion and interest behind and work only for financial gains. But in the long run this could prove to be disaster as the person will end up being frustrated and dissatisfied.
As it is said ‘Money cannot buy all the happiness’, similarly salary is undoubtedly an unavoidable factor, but an individual should also not disregard their interest when considering working opportunities. A person must work in the field that motivates and challenges them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...one engages in also very essential. According to me, having passion and interest for work i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94137653258 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0327452365 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140475417015 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519085834161 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668906092826 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815560312833 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515574230945 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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