Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to be successful at sports. Others believe that hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both sides and add your own opinion
In today’s contemporary era people are burning mid night oil in order to be successful in various sports activities. It is thought by some individuals that success can be achieved by person’s natural talent and rest of the masses put forward the view that working hard and being well-prepared are two important aspects for winning a sports competition. While i believe that for succeeding in a game, practicing and hard working are two key elements, natural abilities of a person contributes at large to enhance the chances of victory.
On the one hand, there are numerous potential reasons of why some people believe that owing to attain success constant practice and extreme hard work is required. Firstly, a long practice allows players to gain confidence and be strong in order to compete with other team players. In other words regular preparation infuse important rules and develop techniques which are pre- requisite for an activity like sports. Secondly. by practicing for a few weeks, they can easily deal with different circumstances as without experiencing anything people can not become experts in anything, therefore, practice is needed before the final competition for being expert. Finally, it has been believing by individuals since long time that hard work is a key to success. In other words, if people would make efforts to achieve anything, they can make everything possible. For example- a sports person must be fit physically in order to play in a perfect way without any physical problem. Hence, working hard for making their body flexible, fit and healthy by running, gymming and jogging is a great hard work.
On the other hand, i also think that person’s skills and abilities, that he or she inherited from their guardians, makes him or her a excellent sports person. First of all, a few people have unique talents and capabilities that they are not needed to learn by practice. In other words, these abilities are passed from one generation to another such as running really fast. For an instance, Milkha singh is one of the renowned athlete in India who is called flying man and it was his natural talent. Besides this. Having some unique capabilities makes them feel more confident as in every team different athletes have various abilities and with the collective endeavours the competition is won by them. That is why, those players greatly influence the success of their team in a positive way.
To conclude, although i think that practice makes a person perfect and working hard is an integral part for any sports league, without some natural talents people can not gain expertise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68749889006 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535632183908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4025014734 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.944444444 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314845739679 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932216829924 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689048986837 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204483450028 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798958309027 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.