Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Society has never offered us so munch variety like it has these days. A number of people are of the opinion that we have too much options available to choose from nowadays. I tend to completely agree with this view, personally, I think we have too much choices to make. From the jeans we wear to the food we eat and television channels to schools. This choices leaves us bewildered and depressed.
While choice is good, too much of it cripples us with indecision. People becomes paralyzed by too much variety and wrecked with uncertainty and regret about whether they made the right choice. For example, you walk into a boutique to buy a pair of jean, only to find out there are different variety of jeans with different color and design. This can lead to confusion on which one in particular, we should go with. One will have to try a lot to find the perfect match they desire. This is exhausting and laborious. As a result of this, too many choices can sometimes lead to absconding from making a decision all together.
Another issue with having too many options available, is a lack of satisfaction. For instance, buying a blender online where there are many blenders to pick from. It becomes an arduous task to sit for hours reviewing them one after the other, so one might just have to settle with one that have a good brand name and maybe a poor quality. They might be disappointed with the outcome of their choice when delivered. As a consequence, too much choice can lead to unsatisfaction because too much choices burdens us and limit our satisfactory outcome.
In conclusion, society has provided us with options like never before. Hence, we have too many variety to choose from, but limiting the amount of choice will have to make will give us less stress and more satisfaction. Like the halcyon days where everything were simple and few choice were needed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ple are of the opinion that we have too much options available to choose from nowada...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...s view, personally, I think we have too much choices to make. From the jeans we wear...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...eat and television channels to schools. This choices leaves us bewildered and depres...
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Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'leaf', 'leave'.
Suggestion: leaf; leave
...ision channels to schools. This choices leaves us bewildered and depressed. While c...
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Line 6, column 489, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... can lead to unsatisfaction because too much choices burdens us and limit our satisf...
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Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun variety seems to be countable; consider using: 'many varieties'.
Suggestion: many varieties
...s like never before. Hence, we have too many variety to choose from, but limiting the amount...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55640501712 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548484848485 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5374450404 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177031063911 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580759378607 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565563647335 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123057676792 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314135409716 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.