Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others argue that happiness depends on other factors. Discuss both viewpoints and state your view.
In general people consider that economic achievement is crucial for happiness and also largely dependent on economic condition. But some persons believe that there are other factors also which contribute in overall personal happiness. I believe that money can’t be the main factor for happily life. I shall discuss both points in essay.
People who believe that personal wellbeing have direct connection with wealth have some valid points. To begin with, basic necessities must be met in order to live the dignified life and without dignity, one can’t be felt happy. These basic necessities can only be bought through money. Furthermore, mere fulfillment of basic needs may not give long term satisfaction and people like to do more activities such as travel, eat outside, see cinemas etc. and no doubt that money is required to enjoy on such places. For example, as per survey in Britain, half of the people consider luxury trip as major source of happiness and do not hesitate to spend large sum on luxury.
However, it is found that despite of having money and comfort in life people are not happy and clearly there are other factors involved to become satiate. Firstly, personal relationship must be smooth with family members and with society as well. It is found in some cases that people do not have cordial relation with members and ignored everywhere. For instance, my uncle who is CEO of the company has enough wealth but still not leading happy time. Secondly, health contributes major role in personal gratification. People, who are ill or not fit- in owing to any reasons, can’t be happier irrespective of their financial status.
To conclude, money is definitely plays an important factory in personal happiness but there are other factors like relation, health, respect in society which also cannot be ignored for getting happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... have some valid points. To begin with, basic necessities must be met in order to live the dignif...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ty, one can't be felt happy. These basic necessities can only be bought through money. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in fact, in general, no doubt, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12459016393 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5932125657 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9816086847 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0588235294 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232100634649 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734648680842 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658502602947 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156771638531 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716876637776 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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