Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think it is important for children to get to school.
There is no doubt that education plays a vital role in one's life. Although, some people think that when children learn from home gain wider knowledge than from school, but academic experience and practical training is mostly acquired from school.
On the one hand, some parents of the current generation are well employed which make them consider that teaching their children in home is better. This is because they are well educated and they acquire knowledge through social exposure and workplace. For example, a software technology which they work on, can widely be used to teach and share their experiences of the industrial practical solutions. However, if parents hesitate to engage or show the outside world problems, the children may be unaware of real world problems.
On the other hand, some parents encourage their children to attend schools in-order to gain broader knowledge. This is because they can have exposure of variety of courses from arts to science, history and industrial programs. As a consequence, it allows an opportunity for the children to pursue their area of interest or passion. For instance, if a child wishes to pursue science may acquire deeper knowledge from school teachers which in turn helps the child to pursue baccalaureate degrees. If the chid is forbidden to attend schools then the child's potential talent may be unrecognized which could mislead the career path.
In conclusion. despite parents who encourage homeschooling for better knowledge, only schools can provide vast experience and social exposure to the children which can help them to be mature. In my opinion, attending school helps to groom and nourish in terms of capabilities and strengthen their will to face the outside world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6571788592 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5138632852 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241468830475 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771716092273 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645124276856 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147562876212 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342593739002 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.