SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE A HIGH MORE SOCIAL/OTHER BELIEVE
IT IS OPPOSITE.DISCUSS BOTH VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Nowadays, technology is playing an prominent role in folks life. Some folks think that
technological innovations made folks more sociable, while others are disagree
with it. In this essay I will discuss both the views and give my opinion in
further part.
On the positive side, it is fact that modern technology is part of human life. Furthermore,
it is now possible that folks can easily contact each other who are living in the
other countries,state or city with the use of internetm,mobile phones or laptops
in regular basis. In addition, frequently contact among relatives, family members,
friends make their bond strengthens.It also plays an stong role in transportation facilities
like metro trains, flights throgh that travel time has minimised and folks can
visit their relatives, clients, friends wherever they want. There are huge benefits
to the industries,stock markets, digital currency markets and so on. Through, technology
employer, clients and employee interect with each other easily.Furthermore, folks get
live update regarding market situations.Obviously, technology has increased the
interections among folks.
On the negative side, someimes, children and adults become more obsessed with technology
that may avoide interaction with their relativesb and friends. Moreover, children become
more attract towards with new gadgets that may avoid spending time with their parents.
It will not only affect their present life but also affect in their future. Through,
using more technology it affects their health like eyes and other part of the body.
For instance, children who are in a very small age get to wear a lances or become
irritate easily.
Ergo, I agree that modern technology has given folks a platform to stay in touch
with their loved ones but at the same time it has taken out face to face interactions
with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58020477816 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00168659661 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0859941586 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146424147139 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593054440259 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624035184944 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044071340746 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578453024749 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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