Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the modern era, crimes rate are increasing rapidly and it is devastating to see that establishments are unable to keep crime rate under control. In order to give suggestions to the law makers, some school of business advocate that there should be same punishment for an offence and believe capital punishment can control the rate, while many others opine this and want the acknowledgement of the reason for the offence before punishing. Both the opinions are scrutinised before passing any conviction.
Indeed inhumane can be severe, but there should be a fear in our society so that no individual will think about committing any crime. For an instance, Dubai law makers give capital punishment to every criminal and this is the uttermost reason the crime rate in Dubai is less than 5%. Moreover, Punishing all the offenders with the same intensity will decrease the work load on judges and they can use that time saved in making new policies by which crime rate can be lowered.
Admittedly, no person is born criminal. It is our society who behave harsh and turn an asset into liability. Further more, intensity of crimes are different and reason behind them can differ. To substantiate it, punishing both people with same imprisonment will be in-adequate for one who killed someone in self defence while the other who killed because of jealousy. Hence, abandoning someone without knowing the reason will be abash for our society.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it can be concluded that the offenders with the motive of harming society must be punished severely while people turned into offenders must be given another chance so that our society can be benefited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02867383513 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6259464706 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6681957026 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299175910999 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991371126678 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669466240819 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184328897117 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283957205052 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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