Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
With the advent of technology, it is evident that number of choices available in almost every sector has increased exponentially. I believe upto a large extent that there are large number of options in various fields nowadays but there are some reservations too. I putforth my views before drawing a concerte conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.
From the recent few years, food sector has grown drastically people are trying different concoctions and a number of cusinies of are available for an individual to satisfy their taste bud irresepective of the area/locality. To illustrate, Pizza being an Italian dish is easily available in almost every part of world with a vast number of tastes and styles. Hence it is evident that food sector has abundance of choices for an individual. Another sector which offers a vide range of varities is Travelling Sector. Advancement in world of automobile has made vehicles affordable for almost each and every income group people with variety of options. It is evident that from last few years companies are competing to launch affordable vehicles eventually giving a large number of options to the buyers, car-brand like Nano, Marauti, Kiwid are best to exemplify.
In the race of choices, the Education Sector has also flourishes alot different type of courses are available. Moreover, skilled based specialized programme designed in the light of need of a person has made a boom in the sector. Internet has break the geographical barriers for the learners, one can learn online with number of sources. Furthermore, Fashion sector is also offering uncountable range of style/outfit/dress for people of any age group. Fashion industries choices are increasing day by day as people are ready to take risk with their looks and even love to try different attries for different occasions. Concept of uniqueness for everyone has ignition the war in industries for inventing new styles day by day resulting in so many options for shoppers.
However, almost every sector has been infulenced by this changing trend of offering variety in goods/services but still these are available to an individual with conditions. It varies from country to country and locality to locality. For instance, Less developed and rural areas people are not blessed enough to have number of choices on their plate in contrast to persons belong to developed and urban areas. In case of career and education the number of options are always restricted for persons belong to former group.
To conclude, there is no shadow of doubt that the number of choices available in abundance in almost every sector but the availabilty or access of same is subject to condition that the belonginess to the area whether developed or un-developed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, in contrast, of course, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15212527964 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89021581319 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505592841163 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5172907323 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.15 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.35 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111966130576 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330672229772 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419968739413 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659626570047 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335886468515 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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