Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisements can be said to rule the roost in the commercial world and are subjected to much criticism. Whereas on the one side they are alleged to nurture consumerismm, on the other side they are claimed to be informative of new products. While admitting that there is some truth in the latter fact, this essay asserts that advertisements promote consumerism that is deleterious to the society in multiple ways.
On the positive side, advertisement makes people aware of the multitude of products available in the market. For instance, people come to know of the launch of a new product only through advertisements. This in a way, makes the market competitive. Competition leads to the cost of products being reasonable and to the quality of goods being enhanced. Further, the advertising industry employs thousands of people. Advertisements are creative and promote creativity in arts and showbiz.
On the negative side, advertisements encourage consumerism. To exemplify, people are mesmerized by flashy advertisements and they spend impulsively even for items that they do not really require. In spite of tight competition, this would hike prices and eventually affect the economy of the poor. Advertisements are also extremely expensive and cost of advertising is included in the price of the article.
Having analysed the pros and cons of the matter in some details, it can be asserted that although advertisements are part and parcel of modern life, they help consumerism to thrive. It is not in the best interests of the society and should be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... the commercial world and are subjected to much criticism. Whereas on the one side...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, whereas, while, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22709163347 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17669067256 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1046459303 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195176182228 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635256316395 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430342194812 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11400754717 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360476861569 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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