In modern society, the importance of STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) subjects has been increasing. While some people argue that History is one of the most essential school subjects, others believe that subjects like Science and Technology are more important.
On the one hand, people value STEM subjects for several reasons. As we are living in a highly industrialized society, which relies on the advances in numerous natural science theories and technologies, STEM subjects equipped students with knowledge that is useful for their future careers. For example, studying Science and Technology could stand students in good stead by providing practical skills like programming and calculating. In addition, studying Science and Technology can also deepen the understanding of the natural world. Teachers can motivate students' awareness about environmental problems like global warming and water pollution, which encourages them to be committed to solving these problems.
On the other hand, other people also emphasize the importance of History. It is true that natural science only accounts for one part of the science community and the other part is social science like History. By learning History, students gain knowledge about the development of their nation, as well as various regions around the world. This kind of knowledge is extremely helpful to foster a sense of cultural identity and patriotism. Moreover, students are often asked to judge historical figures and events. These people and events are usually controversial and can not be simply judged as right or wrong, so students can improve their critical-thinking skills through this activity. In addition, being ignorant of the history of one's motherland is a shame.
From my perspective, I agree that History is one of the most essential school subjects and it is as important as subjects like Science and Technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ition, being ignorant of the history of ones motherland is a shame. From my persp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93316420701 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7801543345 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355250119424 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119861669199 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117448987829 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268569264439 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108420755623 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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