Some people say that learning history has no value in this modern world. Others say that everyone should have knowledge about history to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few people opine that history has no significant value in this virtual world. While other argue that history is important in order to understand our present better. However, I believe that one should know their cultural and country history to certain extent so that they can understand their present.
Many choose to study science and math subject because they have better job prospect compared to history. Today, many youngsters spend more hours studying to get top grade to get into reputed college and hence have no time to study subject like history. For example, schools and universities conduct exams only on STEM subjects because they alone can help young adults get a better job. Also, people do not want to spend time learning about past as it will not change anything in the present nor in the future. In addition, we live in a world where every things is constantly changing, hence one need to be updated about the technology such as artificial intelligence and robotic science. History does not help in any way to earn a living hence, it is given less weightage.
On the flip side, few argue that people should learn about history as it will help them understand about the human evolution and how far humans have come. This way they will embrace of what they have. Also, it is very important to know about our culture and tradition. Young generation should learn about their culture so that they can pass it on to next generation. This way, their culture can evade from extinction. Today, many languages and customs are in the verge of disappearance because they fail to learn about their history. For example, In my country a few decades ago there were 500 communities but now we have only 287 communities and this is due to the fact that people did not learn their history.
In conclusion, it is enough for one to learn about history to certain extent. However, it is important that one should spend their time on learning subjects like science so that they can have better lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ignificant value in this virtual world. While other argue that history is important i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79827089337 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39396809182 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9699155887 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243178745143 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883791018241 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670726233908 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175940183785 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730071035095 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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