Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
An issue facing many big cities contemporarily is that a quiet number of people have been turned into bingewatch of netflix movies and online cinema on electronic gadgets in spite of booking theater tickets. Therefore, it is always a dilemma of which one is most entertaining and convenient in terms of time. Personally, I believe that glacing movie is advantageous in theatres but handy smartphones and tablets definitely saves our time and are cost-effective.
First of all, it is probable that cineplex offers a multifarious benefits under a one roof. The key points of tranquil, wide-screen, sound proof audio, comfortable sitting and popcorn in hands make a moment capturing and long-lasting. Besides, people under the exposure of darkness in the hall makes the movie more intriguing and exquisite. Lastly, there are significant play zones for children for their entertainment purpose too. Multi cineplex offers varied discounts and to earn points for a valid movie ticket. For example, in starting of the movie a visual of questionnaire often telecasted to earn points for a free ticket.
Another significant reason of perceiving movie at theater is that screens are too far away from the eyes of the audience which does not cause harm to the eyes. Whilst constant hours of glimpse of movie scenes on mobile phone can cause eye strain as well as neck pain. To put it another way, looking pictures on the comfy leather seats with upraising legs on it support is more reliable as compared to kneeling down neck on the tablets which effect both on sitting posture as well as eyes too. The apparent reason is that people spend a large amount of time on electronic phones, thus enormously effect their work life balance.
However, it has to be admitted that people who are unable to bear the expensive tickets of the theatres find this method suitable. With the ease of internet, the you tube and google provides the features of downloading , saving, watch for later as well as minimum payment for new release movies as well as it is suits the most who have a hectic schedule and extremely busy in their life.
Therefore, I am convinced that benefits of ample space, releasable sits, limited time as well as eateries make the picture perfect movie for the outdoors, the victims of busy life and unapproachable persons to the cinemas make their life purposeful while watching on tablets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00249376559 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73090373358 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573566084788 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1158819608 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.375 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0568927674575 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0187177593046 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212796700634 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327394299716 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159570859359 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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