Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
these days, depending on the development of technology, we can do almost activities on smart phone. As a result, we can watch any films online without going directly to the cinema. just install the Internet and you can do everything with the smart phone. some says that is convenient for watching films online while others argue that we need to go to the cinema to be more fulfilled.
On the first view, they have their own advantages and disadvantages. watching movie online can lead to many good aspects. first, we do not need to book the ticket and wait for a long line. The films have already installed in the web and almost these films are free, we just go to the web, pay fee (may be) and watch it. moreover, we can watch whenever we want. For those who do not have time to watch films immediately when they were issued to the public. In addition, we can stop or pause and review the films when we do not have time do go through full films. However, watching films online also can create some frustrated problems. firstly, we can fully enjoy all the moment. when we are at the cinema, the atmosphere will make our feeling full unconsciously. furthermore, we will feel lonely when we watch films online, especially when we watch alone. people almost are used to the power of crowds, other feeling can affect our feeling so watching film on cinema with others can make us feel more excited.
On the other view, we can also see two-sided like above. we cannot deny the benefits of watching movies on cinema. we can enjoy fully the feeling of the films. Maybe it called crowds effect,when we see other people with feeling like us, it make our feeling full fill. we also using this activities like means to meet friends ,make friends or reduce stress. On the other hand, this also creat some troubles. we must be in long line for a long time, and we also need to book the ticket because it can sold out. we cannot watch it whenever we want because each film has its own day to issue to the public.
In my opinion, I am neutral in this issue. Each view is right and wrong in different ways. we cannot confirm that which is total right or wrong. I think we should take both choices. we can watch films online whenever we do not have time to go to the cinema. Beside, we also can go directly to the cinema when we have free time, or we need to lose stress, or when we want to meet friends and even when we want. we must choose the suitable solution rely on our situation.
In one word, we should make a proper choice by themselves depending on the context. make sure that what is suitable for your hobby or your present situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 7.85571142285 369% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 24.0651302605 274% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 488.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39754098361 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26458069384 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440573770492 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 5.43587174349 460% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6048304583 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0303030303 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7878787879 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340892523971 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101921765709 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705909351059 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214367022892 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896822889965 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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